This is my first poem i wrote today in writing camp!!! Tell me if i have this love thing right
Forbidden Love <3
She sits in the far edge of her courtyard,
The cool wind whips around her arms,
A wind that should raise chills;
But it doesn’t.
She feels a bitter-sweet emotion,
A feeling of joy,
For she sits by him.
But dread of what may lie ahead.
It is a nameless emotion,
A feeling far to special
to trap within the limits of a name.
It just is.
It is a love with no boundries,
a fear with no end.
But possibly, love conquered all
may not be such an irrelevent chiche.
We had to make it rhyme sooo it is pretty stupid… this is for YOUR entertainment!
In the far courtyard she sits,
As a strong, icy wind hits.
It is such a chilling breeze,
Yet is doesn’t cause her to freeze.
She felt an emotion that is bitter-sweet,
Joy from sitting by him makes her heart beat.
A feeling too special to limit by a name.
It’s fear with no end, love with no reigns.
But possibly through all dismay,
‘Love conquers all’ isnt such an irrelevent chliche.
epic w00t
oocl
you know what else is warm?
You did a great job making the original rhyme, even if it doesn’t suit the genre. Way to go!